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Post by Camryn & Steven Winters on Apr 10, 2011 11:14:33 GMT -5
Winters, Camryn Jessica & Steven Carl -------------------------------------------------------------------------
"We'll always be the best of friends"
................................................................................................. IDENTIFICATION
Name: Camryn Jessica Winters Steven Carl Winters
Nickname: Cam, CJ Steve, Stevie
Age: 16
Gender Male and Female
Orientation: Gay; Bisexual
Year: Sophomore
Species: Human
Housing: Dorm
................................................................................................. ALL ABOUT YOU
Hair: Camryn: In a sense, she almost looks like her brother with how short her hair is. Not as thick as her brothers. Silvery white hair compiles of what it is.
Steven: He has thick short hair that usually seems to always be in a mess. He doesn't usually take too much care for it, unless he is hounded by Camryn to do so. Silvery white hair.
Facial Features: Camryn: Ivory skin tone alone. Pale rosy lips, high cheek bones and a gaze of piercing blue that seem to catch almost anyone in their tracks. The only jewelry she ever wears is that of dangling earrings in the form of a cross and a necklace in the same way. She also wears a hat all the time.
Steven: In a sense, Steven looks almost exactly like Camryn. His skin though is a little lighter, but not with an ivory color to it. His lips are lighter and cheek bones a little lower. His eyes are lighter in color, but still has the same gaze that people stare at.
Height: Camryn: 5'4"
Steven: 5'5"
Weight: Camryn: 125lbs
Steven: 130lbs
Everything Else: Camryn: She tends to where clothing that usual tom boys wear. Nothing frilly, somewhat baggy pants, and certain black and message T-shirts. Sometimes she'll be wearing clothes exactly like that of her brother, Steven.
Steven: He usually wears clothes that are simple and easy. Either somewhat baggy or just right fitting jeans, skin tight or loose T-shirts, and a plain pair of tennisshoes.
Likes & Dislikes: Camryn: Likes- Guys
- Girls
- Hanging out with brother
- Hanging out with guys
- Dogs
Dislikes- Prissy girls
- Girly objects
- Gold Fish
- Cats
- Donkey's
Steven: Likes- Hanging with his sister
- Dogs
- Guys{}
- Pot Stickers
- Killer whales!!!!!!!
Dislikes- People who aren't sane
- Flowers
- Girls
- Cats
- Quails
Personality: These two tend to be quite relaxed, easy to get along with most of the time. Their easy going manner shows nothing of how they could be, only that they seem apt to work well together. Nothing bothers them, always seeming to not jump or freak out about what was to come up. Hanging out with each other had always been one where they usually could figure something out about the other, if something might be a bit troublesome with the other. They also seem to always take care of each other, seeing that nothing gets by them of what is wrong with the other. They usually show nothing that would probably cause any problems to others, tending to keep those sort of things to themselves.
Steven and Camryn are both good students, just tending to deal with life as it goes. They have simple grades usually doing well with what they are given. Nothing seems to get them all that angy, though that doesn't mean they will snap if it is for something that may not have been necessary. It never seems like it will change much for them, seeing that they wouldn't have much of a problem with what was around them. Their easy tempered persona's seemed to make it easy for some to at least relax when around her, not really minding the fact that they are still teens.
................................................................................................. BACK IN TIME
Family: You must have at least two, but you can have more than three.
- Father: Walter Winters - 45 - Welding
- Mother: Renea - 44 - Florist
- Older Brother: Jeff - 21 - Machening
- Younger Sister: Karen - 13 - School
Birthplace: Vancouver, Wa
Birthday September 9, 1994
Ethnicity: Caucasian
History: Camryn and Steven were born to proud parents of Walter and Renea. The whole thing was one of the best part of the beginning of their life, seeing that they both were a wonderful part of the family. It a good living in the first few years, and it wasn't too much of a problem for any of the family at all, and within the next three years, the family had a new addition.
The twins were always together when doing something when they were getting older, and as time went on, they moved to Chicago for many reasons, seeing that there was little for them in Washington. They were able to do much here, and there was a lot more for all the kids as they got older. It all didn't seem any different, and pretty soon, both Camryn and Steven had found something they liked at about age 8. Dealing with a bow while hunting one time while hunting for Camryn showed that she was quite good at what she did, veering it back on course when it was going in a different direction. Steven on the other hand, had found a use for daggers, in which brought great amusement in how he was able to throw it.
These brought their parents attention to the fact that they were both special, finishing up the last few years of public school with great ease before going to Alexander Academy. It was a great way for them to deal with their own abilities, seeing that they knew that something has a possibility for them. After their first year, they know that much of their abilities will be soon showing, since both know that it would be great to hone their skills.
................................................................................................. ABILITIES
Weapon: Camryn: Bow and Arrow
Steven: Dagger
Weapon Strengths: Camryn:
- Steel Shatter -This makes it easy for her to send the arrow through steel, one thing that seemed quite intruiging to her. This makes it easy to get through items that might be tricky for most to get through, and knows that it can be of quite an assistance. The only sad thing is that it can't go through most metallic objects or things that have iron and metal base.
- Tree Bound -This makes it easy for the arrow to be able to go through the edges of tree's and the like with little problem. Its helped multiple times with targets she wanted to get were almost completely hidden by the trees and she was able to get them like that. It gets harder, though, when there are multiple tree's or she tries to get it to get through the center of the tree.
- Water Log -This attack, for some reason, makes it easier for her to get someone who may be in a small lake or pond. Its something that was not really expected to be know, but it has helped often enough for those who may have wanted the help. The only downside is that it won't go all that deep in large lakes or very deep ponds.
Steven:
- Explosive Dagger -This kind of dagger is one that packs a huge punch, exploding when in comes in contact with its target. It works well in situations that need that last touch to finish what needs to be done. It can be done in an case, in almost any situation he would like it to happen. It can be used in underwater use, its aftershocks being able to destoy certain things that might be easily affected. Its ineffective when dealing with entering certain hazards that might be around. In a few cases, it never truly dealt with close range damage, for fear of damaging himself.
- Fire Dagger -This kind of dagger is able to deal with poison, slowly making it hard for people to move. Depending on the person, this dagger will have many effects, no matter what sort of person it may be. It doesn't matter what circumstance it may be, he can have a bit of fun with how he deals with it. Oil is the only way for it to catch fire, making it easy to light with a lighter. He'll have to recover it in oil multiple times to do so.
- Poison Dagger -This dagger will cause clothing on fire, and not only that, it will cause severe gashs and burns. 2nd degree burns are the highest it can do, but that doesn't mean it will hurt badly.
There's a few different ways the poison works, with different stages to them. One starts off with no hitch at all with what happens, before numbing the area, while slowly spreads while getting painful and would hurt much worse as it progresses. The one thing that doesn't help is it can be taken of easily, if known about the poison, by cloth, water, or the likes. Not many know about it though.
................................................................................................. FINISHING TOUCHES
Password: Chicken
Themes: None at the moment.
Face Claim: Nope.
For Boys:
[code*] ★ ANIMANGA CHARACTER NAME IN CAPS HERE - animanga title here - character name here[/*code]
For Girls:
[code*] ♥ ANIMANGA CHARACTER NAME IN CAPS HERE - animanga title here - character name here[/*code]
RP Sample: This was definetly going to be something new, and tricky for Paxton to try and get through. Will was definetly going to have a tricky time, especially when it comes to getting into a battle. It would come in handy, and he hoped that something would come out of it as the battle would wage on. As these thoughts went through his mind, Paxton was going through one of the many hallways, going to one of the rooms that was chosen for him. It was definetly gong to be an interesting thing to see what will happen.
The pokemon he was going to use was that of his starter, Will the Snivy, though it all seemed like he was very uncertain of what was going on. The Grass Snake was at his heels, looking about, trying to see who might be coming to get him. It wasn't like he wouldn't mind much, if he wasn't that afraid of getting bullyied, but there was something that should always be taken in to get things done. Paxton glanced at his pokemon, trying to think of something that could help the Grass-type to at least get something done and gain a little bit of experience. It was definetly going to be interesting to see how he can get the pokemn to do decent in battle.
"I know your not going to like it, but at least get through this with an almost open mind, please?"
Paxton spoke to Will, who looked up toward the trainer. He didn't seem to like the idea of doing this, but just gave a nod to what was said. Paxton just shook his head a little, looking back up when he soon found the door he was to enter. He stood in front of it for a moment, thinking for a moment if he should go through with it for a moment, then opened the door with Will right behind. When he entered, though, he was amazed to see what was there.
What he saw was definetly something that he would never happened to see, especially with how it looked. Destroyed buildings and crumbling bridges were all over the place, being over taken by that of tree's and shrubs. It all appeared like something had come and destroyed it, then letting anything grow through cracks and brought more damaged with how everything was making it. Paxton gazed around, amazed at how everything was able to stand, himself standing on a building on one side. Will was also looking around, somewhat awed, but still uncertain, of what he was seeing.
On one of the many buildings, Paxton soon noticed that another man, apparently waiting with his arms crossed. It appeared like he was just waiting, and for a moment, Paxton didn't know if the man had already sent out his pokemon or not. He looked about then, wondering where the pokemon may be untill he saw it towards the ground, standing in the grass. It was a bit tricky to see what sort of pokemon it was, but it could possibly be a Flying type pokemon. It was definetly going to be an interesting battle, and he looked towards his own pokemon, wondering if Will was going to be able to get through.
"I'm not ready for this. It would be not be all that fun."
"Its better to get stronger, and I think you'll do better if you get stronger."
Will looked up at Paxton at that, but went towards the vines and lowered himself down the many stories of vines till he reached the bottom. It took a few moments, but the Snivy soon got there, backing towards a spot at where he was hidden in the brush. Paxton sighed a little and looked back towards the man and nodded a little, thinking of something that should work. Everything would make it a lot harder for him, but the brush and tree's definetly brought about some good ways for him to deal with getting Will about.
"The names Paxton. I guess I'll call it first. Will, use Leer, the follow it up with Tackle."
Still hiding in the bushes well below, having faintly heard it, but didn't fully follow through. He just sat in the bushes not actually coming through on the attack. The Aerodactal was fairly imposing, and Will didn't even feel like it was right. This sure was going to be a tough battle, and, from where Paxton was at, it sure was going to be a while before anything could be done about it. {Actually from a Pokemon Rp I'm on.}
................................................................................................. OOC
Known As: Camryn please.
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Experience: About 3 or 4 years. Maybe a little more
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Alex
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Post by Alex on Apr 10, 2011 21:34:05 GMT -5
You didn't specify who was gay and who was bisexual.
What are their hair colors? Overall style is okay, I suppose.
I'd like a little more on their personality. Easy going and tough are two different things. I'd like you to describe a situation where they would act like both. Go into more detail about their actions and how they treat others and each other.
You didn't specify who was who in the family. Relation: should be changed to how they are related to you.
You need to fix your abilities. She's not a superhero, how can she control the direction of an arrow if it's already headed in another direction? Your second ability for the Arrows is badly described. I don't know what it does.
His abilities have weaknesses, but they are situational. They must have a general weakness, not a weakness that only applies in specific situations. Fix that.
You didn't do your FC.
Fix all of that and you'll be fine.
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Post by Camryn & Steven Winters on Apr 12, 2011 18:42:26 GMT -5
I've fixed it all.
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Alex
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Post by Alex on Apr 13, 2011 7:01:04 GMT -5
You have situational weaknesses for the daggers again. There's no way for a person to avoid or escape from the attack unless they have a certain environmental condition or something that nobody ever carries. WHAT MAKES THIS ATTACK WEAK THAT IS NOT SITUATIONAL. SOMETHING THAT EVERYONE CAN USE TO AVOID THEM.
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Post by Camryn & Steven Winters on Apr 13, 2011 17:46:28 GMT -5
Any better?
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